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I enjoyed the part about what your parents do for you. This reminded me of when my parents took me and my dog to the beach, My dad throws sticks into the waves for my dog to fetch. Next time you could add more full stops on the end of some of your sentences.
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I enjoyed the part about what your parents do for you. This reminded me of when my parents took me and my dog to the beach, My dad throws sticks into the waves for my dog to fetch. Next time you could add more full stops on the end of some of your sentences.
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